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This one is a tender tale
With sexy bits, in some detail
Now put the children all in bed
So they don't hear what will be said

We take you to a man and wife
Both have lived a lustful life
The sex was hot, and frequent too
When parts and places all were new

But then the easy love got hard
The lovers both let down their guard
They let an easy thing get tough
'till none at all was quite enough

When sex gets hard, some things get soft.
To try and keep their love aloft,
The lovers made a little game
The gasoline on passion's flame

It started with a bitter quip
That the husband's wife let slip
While receiving oral treats
Sprawled out wide beneath the sheets

She bet him that she wouldn't cum
His cock too small, his lips too dumb
She said that she would owe a buck
If he could give a decent fuck

He said he would pay her five
If she could make him feel alive
And with the stakes up just a bit
Both of them got down to it

And OH the sex that those two had
That anger love that drives you mad
The competition made them fight
For passion's power through the night

But when it all was said and done
It was clear the wife had won
She made five and he made one
The best of it had just begun

And so, throughout the passing years
The lovers became auctioneers
Fucking, waving dollar bills
They bet against each other's skills

The rules are now a written pact
And now you bet while in the act
To win the cash, what you must do
Is make them want it more than you

A common move that they both know
You give them pleasure, really slow
Then you ransom that sensation
Forcing them into temptation

With every move, and every thrust
They try to beat out greed with lust
They fight the urge to cum until
They'll earn more than the other will

But with the pressure and the greed
The emphasis is put on speed
They learn the weakest spots and then
It all becomes routine again ...
©2007-2009 ~AceOSpades
:iconaceospades:

Author's Comments

I've had this idea for a very long time now ... but always thought it would be difficult to put into words... I'm not sure how well I did here... but perhaps you'll enjoy.

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:iconaverage-freak05:
wow Kebs one of the most clever id say. Its steamy its hott and then it's not. You have some clever lines in there that i swear I should have thought of. Just kidding, you know how that works.

I loves it. I wanna fuck it. :joy: FAV PLEASE!?

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:iconlostnsilence:
haha. i read the title was like "oh dear..." haha but yeah i think you put it into words very nicely. unique idea. as always. :-)

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"He would create proudly out of the freedom and power of his soul, as the great artificer whose name he bore, a living thing, new and soaring and beautiful, impalpable, imperishable."
:iconaceospades:
Hehehe I KNEW that'd be a catchy "must read" title ... I tried to make it less about the baaanging and more about the competitive nature of love and, well... baaanging :P

Glad you liked though !

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O&A party rock!
:iconlostnsilence:
hahahahaha

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"He would create proudly out of the freedom and power of his soul, as the great artificer whose name he bore, a living thing, new and soaring and beautiful, impalpable, imperishable."
:icontudoeamor:
great job. strangely true. :)

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so i hear. ;-)

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Love is everything. {a war for peace is like an orgie for abstinence}
:iconguillotinedoll:
I didn't read the title until afterwords - and it's fits the scene. Brilliant poem you have here .
:iconwerethylacine:
This made me terribly sad about the jaded nature of the world. I adore how you twist things with your talent... the perversions and fantasy strangenesses that we nearly take for granted in our daily lives and the still-mystic world of sensuality... I'm rambling. And in class.

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:iconduhastmich:
Some of the rhyming don't have the smoothest flow to it, but who does it botha anyway. It's altogether another catchy poem by my stable boy. Kiss me, kiss me now. You steam sexy poetry.

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They say there's a sun in the sky.
:iconwildkard:
Hmm...kinky...but I wouldn't ever want to play that game. I'd lose every time, lol! Again, your skills with flawless rhyme and rhythm amaze me. Nice one!

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The only true battle is the one with oneself. To search for justification in others is the act of a fool. My soul is often in doubt, and yet it holds my salvation. My first enemy is the one within.

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